The novella had its own complex structure where the narrator(s) would describe the actions in each window in groups of four (each group standing for 24hrs). I added a further complication by making each group include a character from a different window in the sequence 1-2-3-4 at all times. So if the order was 2-1-3-4, a character from window 1 would appear in window 2, a character from window 1 would appear in window 2, and so on. Already, you see the utterly unnecessary complications involved, and I’m not sure I understand them myself. The map looked like this:
Story Map
1-2-3-4 → 2-1-3-4 → 3-1-2-4 → 4-1-2-3
1-2-4-3 → 2-1-4-3 → 3-1-4-2 → 4-1-3-2
1-3-2-4 → 2-3-1-4 → 3-2-1-4 → 4-2-1-3
1-3-4-2 → 2-3-4-1 → 3-2-4-1 → 4-2-3-1
1-4-2-3 → 2-4-1-3 → 3-4-1-2 → 4-3-1-2
1-4-3-2 → 2-4-3-1 → 3-4-2-1 → 4-3-2-1
This unfinished piece seemed like a shoo-in for a brief blog series. Hence my plan to stuff this blog with regular excerpts from the permanently unfinished novella. I don’t expect anyone to read this (people reading stories on blogs? don’t be ridiculous!), but it’s either on here or in the wastebasket. I only completed the first four sets up to 4-1-2-3, so that’ll be our new story map. If I upload one window per post, I can generate sixteen posts over a few months. Go me! I hope these posts don’t upset my one reader. Love you Joe xxx.
Great idea. I was struck by how inspiring the examples are here. So many story ideas.
ReplyDeleteHi Alison! Yes, I wished I could've taken the idea further, but it petered out.
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